hmmm, verrrry interesting. keep it up, its comming along nicely
it kinda feels like a mix btwn earthclan and homeworld, which is a good thing ^_^
also i know what its like to not get noticed after writing an awesome piece of literature, just remember that your audience is just as important as the story, if not more.
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